Rudeness Amplification

You smacked some knowledge in me

As I did not say please

Though I meant not to be rude

Or unleash an attitude

That your morality would condemn

As you take offence to what’s not said


Yet if I weren’t just but a child

I’d realise neither of us knew better

But being a kid that can’t see through your sh*t

Your example merely informs and embitters


So please find regret

In your foul etiquette

Or neither of us may grow bigger



3 responses to this post.

  1. This poem makes me think of the 60’s and all the liberationist revolutions taking place around the world!



  2. wow!!! Powerful write you have here….Excellent poetry my friend. 🙂



  3. hey..that boy in the photo..i’ve seen it on Discovery, it shocked me to see how much he’s smokin’..he’s so young..anyway the poetry is so inspiring.The lyrics so true..Congrats!



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